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When love tears us apart starring:patcharapa chaichue, thana suttikamol

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Posted 13 November 2010 - 05:55 PM

Thanks for the update. It's getting to the juicy part of things now. I'm glad that Oil wants to help Aum and protect her from evil Noon.
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  Posted 04 December 2010 - 10:39 AM

Part 17

Oil stared at Noon's face with his temperature rising slowly waiting for her to answer her question. Noon, finally realises what situation was she in. All this while that she had known Oil, this was her first Oil was gazing at her full of anger. She could feel it through his eyes which was giving her a lot of pain. Noon clears her throat and decided to admit.

"Whatever Aum told you...from how I know her...she wouldn't lie to you...and make up some stories..." Noon's voice trailed off. "She didn't tell me anything. That is why I want to hear it from you." Oil speak out. "She didn't tell you?" Noon asked in surprised. Oil shook his head in silence still waiting for her explanation. "Wel...I told her that I love you and still do love you just the way I used to and untill the two of you are married, I won't stop trying to get back my fiancee." Noon explained. Oil sighed in disbelief. "What has got into you? I don't think I know the Noon that's in front of me right now. You've change a lot. The previous Noon that I know and whom I used to love, isn't like this at all." Oil told Noon which moved her heart.

"So, you miss the old Noon?" Noon asked. "I do...I miss her alot. The pure, innocent woman that I feel in love with. My first love..." Oil answered as his temper went missing. "The old Noon would stay be here anyway if only her fiancee didn't fall for another woman when he left her...unfortunately...he break her heart...that the reason why the old Noon can't stay the way she was anymore..." Noon explained as she hold up her tears from flowing with pain filling up her heart thinking about how Oil left her for another woman. Guiltiness was filling up Oil.

"I...I'm sorry. I know the word sorry won't make up to what I've done to you...but.."Oil's words stopped when Noon hold his hand. "Come back to me. Just come back and love me just the way you used too. We can even leave Thailand and live the way we were..." Noon speak out as tears flow down her cheek. "Noon..." Oil couldn't utter a word seeing Noon's tears. "I love you...knowing the fact that you don't love me anymore but Aum...just hurts me so much...that I'm acting this way. I know...what I did to Aum was just horrible. But the pain you've caused is just to deep..." Noon's tear were falling heavily. Oil could stop himself for tearing up as well. Knowing how much he had hurt her. Although he doesn't love Noon anymore but she's just like a younger sister to him.

"Come on here..." Oil told Noon as he pulled her arm and hugged Noon comfroting her. May who was there saw what just happen. "Don't tell me he's..." May sighed. "Something wrong?" Film asked May who seems to be worried. May shook her head when she saw a camera flash. It was the paparazzi taking pictures of Oil and Noon hugging. May immediately stood up and walked toward Noon and Oil's table.

"I think the two of you better get going. There's paparazzis..." May told them as Oil release his hug. "Don't worry, I paid him..." Noon admitted. Both Oil and May look at Noon in shocked. "At first I wanted to make it a big news...but after this conversation...it seems pretty worthless. No worries I'll take care of the paparazzis." Noon explained. "And...regarding Aum...I'm still holding on to my words. I'll do everything I can to get you back, Oil. And no one is going to stop me from doing it." Noon continued. Noon excused herself to leave the restaurant when Oil grabbed her arm.

"Do anything you want but just please don't hurt Aum. She had enough of pain already." Oil begged Noon. Noon smirk and replied "Pain? How about me then? You think I'm not in pain?!!" Noon asked angrily and was about to walk away when Oil hold on to her arm not leeting her go. "What do you want?" Noon asked as her voice raised.

"What can I do to make sure you won;t hurt Aum's feelings anymore?" Oil asked desperately. "Like I said...love me the way used to..." Noon replied calmly. "What if I can't?" Oil asked again. "Then leave her...and you don't have to be by my side or her side." Noon answered. "What if I fall for another woman?" Oil asked. "I don't mind as long as it's not Aum Patcharapa Chaichue." Noon continued with a stern voice.

Oil left a big sighed. "I should've known. You're not mad because I left you and fall for another woman but the fact that the woman that I fell for was Aum is the reason why you're mad right?" Oil figured out. May was surprised. "What did Aum do that you hated her so much?" May finally spoke out after being silent. Noon chuckled. "You're still the good in figuring things out very quickly aren't you Oil?" Noon asked. "What is it that you hated Aum so much?" Oil asked. Noon turned and walked closer to Oil staring into his eyes.

"Aum Patcharapa Chaichue...she's my stepsister..." Noon answered. Oil was shocked as May was lost.


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Posted 04 December 2010 - 10:41 AM

hey just to inform those whom have been following up my fan-fic especially kristine and tipstar...thank you very much!!! im currently busy with my exam so can't really update much. however i hope you guys enjoy this short update. i'll continue writing my fan-fic after 15th december when my exam ends. pls be patient...i'll do my best to keep up this fan-fic. wish me luck for my exam alrite. see ya! *lu*
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Posted 04 December 2010 - 04:50 PM

so that explain why she still did it
poor aum&oil what will happen to them
good luck for your exam thanks for the update
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Posted 26 January 2011 - 11:18 PM

Part 18

"Stepsister?" May asked surprised. Noon nodded as tears form again. "You have a stepsister?" Oil asked. "I'm not sure whether you would remember this. It happen a long time ago. It was when we were probably still in high school in Thailand. You might though that we first met when we were in the overseas but our first meeting was actually here in Thailand. It was raining heavily and you were soaked wet..." Noon asked as Oil starred at Noon in confusion and trying to remember what she was talking about.

*Flashback*

The rain was falling heavily, wind blowing really hard, some of the tree branches were breaking into pieces, some trees were already falling down blocking the streets, thunder storms and lightning can be heard and seen everywhere, everyone were busily closing the doors and windows of their houses, the shops and stalls were closing down, people on the street walking were finding a place to protect themselves from the heavy rain, some parts of the streets were already flooding with water, wild dogs and cats were also running around finding for shelters, litters along the road were flying around blown by the wind, everything was uncontrolled…yet, a young girl dress in a white short dress, with her white slippers and a backpack on her shoulder was walking slowly by the streets, with the rain pouring non-stop.

People along the streets under the shades, in buildings were just staring at the odd young girl who seems like she doesn’t feel the fear or wetness covering her. A young boy who was drying up himself saw the young girl. He started looking around and everyone was starring at the girl with a stunned face. He immediately knew he needs to help her. He grabbed an umbrella and ran into the rain towards the girl.

The boy was Oil who was on his way home when it was raining heavily. As he was about to reach the young girl. A limousine stopped by beside the young girl. Then, a middle aged woman came out with her bodyguard holding an umbrella for her. The middle aged woman was shouting at the young girl as the woman pushed her down onto the road, crying in pain. Oil just stare from far forcing himself not to be involve.

Then, he saw another girl coming out from the car. Although he couldn't really see both the girl's face, he knew one of them was suffering and the other was enjoying herself looking at the other girl being scolded by the middle aged woman. Things got worst when Oil saw the girl who was lying on road got kicked by the middle aged woman. The other girl who was standing beside the middle aged woman started laughing out loud.

Oil who wanted to go and help the poor girl who was crying on the road was forcing himself not to since he doesn't want to get involve in others family issue. A few minutes later, the limousine left leaving behind the young girl who was on the road crying in pain.

“Excuse me,” he said to the girl. The girl who was tearing turned and saw the young boy. Tears were flooding in her eyes which touched the Oil’s heart. “May I help you?” he asked again. He put the umbrella above the both of them. Oil asked again “Are you alright?” The girl turned to him and wiped her tears. “Thank you for being concern." The girl smiled and walked off leaving the Oil behind as she walk back into the rain.

Oil just starred as the girl walked off in the heavy rain. He ran quickly back into the shelter wiping himself again as the crowds begins to surround him. “Who is she?” The crowds were surrounding Oil asking about the girl. “The middle aged woman seems familiar” replied the man. The crowd started to talk about the mean middle aged woman and the poor young girl. “What is she doing in the heavy rain?” “What’s with the old woman doing such thing to such a poor little kid?"

Oil just watch the little girl walking away.

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Oil was stunned remembering the past. "I was the girl whom you help up with. The one soaked wet in the heavy downpour. The one who suffered being with her step family. The middle aged woman was my stepmom and the other girl who was laughing out loud at me was...Aum." Noon explained. Both May and Oil were stunned listening to Noon's explanation. Oil couldn't believe what he heard. "No...it couldn't be. The Aum I know...isn't the type who would laugh out at..." Oil said trying to protect Aum. "She might not be like that in front of your eyes. But yet...you saw it by yourself right. Whatever it is, I can't forget everything that her mother and she herself had done to me. How I suffered by myself living with them in pain. They treated me like a slave. I'm here to take revenge on her and her mother." Noon replied sternly as she walks off.

Oil and May was left behind. Film who was there as well was more confused than he was before. "I don't think we can trust her..." May said. "I don't want to trust her too but I saw what happened." Oil cut in. The three of them were silent. "I...I'm leaving." Oil said as he walks off. May was getting more worried of Oil.

Oil drove his car back to Aum's condo. He was walking up the stairs instead of using the lift since he needed to wait when he saw Aum still sitting on the stairs with her face covered. He looked at his watch and it was already past 2am in the morning. Oil walks up slowly towards Aum and scotch down in front of her. "Hey..." Oil said softly trying to hold her face. Aum whom had fall asleep woke up realising the presence of Oil as soon as she opens her eyes. "You're...you're back..." Aum said sadly. Oil nodded. Tears form again. Aum immediately hug Oil.

Oil hug Aum as well kissing her head. "I'm sorry. I shouldn't have hid anything from you. I just didn't want you to get worried and..." Aum's voice trailed off. Oil let go off her and holds her face. "It's alright. Let's just forget about it okay?" Oil comforted Aum. Aum hugged Oil again. "I love you." She whispered to his ears as he replied "I love you too" Oil said kissing neck.

Oil stayed over at Aum's condo. Aum was sleeping in his arms as he stares at her face which always provides warmth to his heart.

'Whatever had happened between you and Noon in the past. I want you to know I'll alway be supporting you from behind. You're the only one who would alway be in my heart and I;m going to accept everything that's in you. Bad or good. I promise I'll protect you from whatever Noon is planning. Eventhough considering what you did to her in the past. If it is even true. I don't want you to shed tears anymore. I want to see a smile on your face every time I see you. I love you'
-Oil-


Oil kissed Aum's forehead and hold on to her tighter as he closes his eyes.

The next morning...

Chakrit woke up and realises that his sister wasn't awake yet. He walks towards Aum's room and opened the door. When he was about to call her. He was shocked to see Aum sleeping with Oil's arm wrapping around her waist. Chakrit was speechless. "When did he came in?" Chakrit ask himself. "Thank god, they still have their clothes on." Chakrit mumbled to himself. Chakrit sigh. He cleared his throat and shouted. "It's 8 in the morning!!" Chakrit said in a high tone.

Both Aum and Oil woke up sleepily and saw Chakrit. Aum was stunned realising Oil was still beside her with his arm around her. Oil realise what trouble he was in. "When did you come in?" Chakrit ask Oil. "Erm..." Oil couldn't find an answer. Aum stood up from her bed and pulled her brother outside. Oil sigh in relieve. "I knew I should have gone earlier." Oil mumbled to himself and clears his throat. He check his handphone and read the text messages from his manager.

"Even if you wanted to sleep with him, can't you find other place or maybe wait when I'm not around?" Chakrit as he stares deeply at Aum. "I'm sorry, we just...had a little argument last night and...we re-consoled. It was not planned. At all. Trust me." Aum trying to comfort her brother. Chakrit sigh. "Prepare breakfast for me please." Chakrit said giving up. Aum forced a smile.

Oil came out from the room as he put's on his jacket. "Erm...I have to go now. I've got the first script reading today." He said to both Aum and Chakrit. Aum nodded. "I think you have one too Aum...it's the new drama...we're working on...together." Oil explained. Chakrit turned to Aum. "Owh...right." Aum suddenly remembered. Chakrit sighed again. "I'll make breakfast by myself." He announced. "Erm...I'll get going. See you later." Oil told Aum as he gave her a quick kiss.

Chakrit rolled his eyes. "What? It's not like you haven't done it before? Let me gues...the current one must be Pei isn't it?" Aum asked teasingly. Chakrit was stunned unable to say anything as Aum flashed a smile teasing her brother.

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'When Love Tears Us Apart' Script Reading Meeting

Noon and the other casts were already ready at the meeting waiting for the main cast to come. "Have you called Oil, Taw?" Madam Bun asked. "He said he's on his way." Taw replied nervously. "How about Aum?" Madam Bun turned to Pam. Pam nodded. "She's on her way." Noon on the other hand was suspecting that they were together.

A few minutes later, Aum came. "I'm sorry, I'm late." Aum forced a humble smile although she's already a top star. Taw grabbed Aum's arm and whispered. 'Wasn't he with you last night?" Taw whispered but it was heard by Noon who was sitting next to Aum. Aum nodded. "He went back to his condo to change. My brother sort of caugh us?" Aum whispered back. Taw sighed worried. Noon on the other hand was furious.

'How could he even still slept with her after what I have told him last night? How can he still loves such a woman?' -Noon-

Oil came in a rush. "I'm sorry. Shall we start?" Oil said trying to live up the meeting. Everyone sighed as the director started introducing the characters in the lakorn. Oil who was sitting opposite of Aum smiled to her. Aum replied his smile as they concentrated on the meeting. Noon who was furious couldn't stand the atmosphere when he spotted Oil and Aum exchanging smile. Noon immediately stood up. Everyone was startled.

"I'm sorry. I don't feel good." Noon said and walks out from the meeting room. "I'll handle her." madam Bun announced. The director sighed and shake his head in dissapoinment. "Shall we continue?" the director ask as the casts agreed.

Noon walked off towards a balcony at the building and shouted to release her anger. She grabbed hold of the balcony tightly. "Patcharapa...you took everything from me. Everything. My family. My wealth. My love. My popularity. EVERYTHING. I'm going to make sure you loose all of them." Noon said to herself angrily as she smirk.


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Posted 27 January 2011 - 09:39 AM

waouh did aum really do that to noon before
sounds weird
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Posted 31 January 2011 - 01:04 PM

Wow stepsisters!! Hope wat Noon told was a lie about Aum's mom beating her up like dat.
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Posted 20 July 2011 - 05:17 AM

pls be inform that i will no longer update this fanfic as i have transfer it to asianfanfics under the name dfanfic using kpop idols. tq.
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