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A Kind of Destiny Starring Oil & Aum

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Posted 29 December 2007 - 09:05 AM

A Kind of Destiny
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Romance Comedy Starring Oil Thana and Aum Patcharapa

“Destiny is not a matter of chance, it is a matter of choice; it is not a thing to be waited for, it is a thing to be achieved.”~William Jennings Bryan

Prologue

“Patch mop the floor! Patch where’s my dinner! Patch iron my clothes! Patch do this, Patch do that,” Aum said in a mocking tone as she washed his clothes, rubbing them fiercely together. She let out a loud sigh and threw the shirt back in to the bowl of water, splashing herself a little. Then she grunted, arms dangling over her knees. “How many times do I have to tell you, my name is Patcharapa not Patch! If not, you can call me Aum like everyone else.” She stopped and thought about it for awhile. “No wait, no you can’t, only people close to me can call me Aum. And God knows I don’t want that.”

“Hey,” his voice rang thru the window. “The clothes aren’t going to wash themselves. Stop fooling around out there and get it done!”

Aum turned around giving him a nasty glare. “I am!” she yelled to him and pick up his Armani shirt. He gave her a victory grin and disappeared from view.

“The clothes aren’t going to wash themselves,” she taunted him as she rubbed them together forcefully. “Stop fooling around” she said with another tug. “That’s all you do, is whine, whine, whine, whine, whine…” she hissed rubbing the cloth harder and harder each time.

Suddenly, *whack* the shirt ripped. Aum’s mouth dropped opened. “Shit,” she gasped as she picked up the shirt. “What else can go wrong in my life,” she cried. She swallowed slowly as she poked her finger through it. “He is so going to kill me.” She let out a small sob as she put the shirt in the rinse bucket.

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Posted 29 December 2007 - 09:08 AM

Hopefully this is one that I will complete and not let it sit in the dungeon like my other stories..hehehe
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Posted 30 December 2007 - 06:41 PM

awww seems like it will be great. I'm waiting for it. The intro is good. *dunno*
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Posted 31 December 2007 - 02:43 PM

awww .... the intro with aum seem so cute and funny ... cant wait to read it ...
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Posted 03 January 2008 - 06:29 AM

Part 1:

*Splat* the newspaper landed on the coffee table.

“So that is what you wanted?” Maurice said as he sat down heavily crossing his legs. “You couldn’t pick a better place than the awards show to show how manly you are huh? What were you thinking?”

“I wasn’t thinking.” He replied as he screened thru the headlines.

“Duh,” Maurice snapped. “You know the press is on your case about this. And you go and give them exactly what they wanted. Why do you like to do this to me huh? Why Oil why? Do I not take good care of you?”

Oil looked into his manager’s face. “I’m sorry.”

“Sorry? Is that all you can say?” Maurice exhaled closing in eyes. “I’m surprise the Boss hasn’t called about this yet.” Just then the telephone rang. “Hah,” Maurice gasped in a high pitch voice. Then he cleared his throat quickly, “Hello,” he answered his phone sweetly.

Oil sat and watch from across the table. From the look of his manager’s face, he could tell it was not good. But he was ready for whatever was coming to him.

“Ok, we’ll be there, bye” Maurice hung up the phone. Then he shot a glare at Oil. “Let’s go. Khun Daeng wants to see you.”
* * *

At Ch7:

“Do you have anything to explain about this?” Khun Daeng asked Oil as she slid the newspaper to him.

“I have nothing to explain just that I should have thought before I acted. I’m sorry.” Oil answered.

“Should have? Yes you should have thought things thru before you acted. You should’ve known better than that. You’ve been in this industry long enough.” Khun Daeng muttered. “Beside, you know the press is on your tail about your relationship with nong Luktarn (Alisa Wills). Now you understand why we don’t want our actors to have a public relationship?” Oil looked at Khun Daeng and nodded his head. “I know this is probably hard on you and everything. But you can’t constantly have news like this over and over again. You have to control your temper. The last thing you need right now is for your fans to have a sour feeling toward you. You know what I mean?”

He nodded his head again. “I’m sorry.” He said.

She nodded and sighed. “Well, there’s nothing much we could do about it now. The only thing I can think of is for you to keep to yourself for a couple of months or at least til the news has died down.”

“Huh?” Maurice asserted. “What about the work in progress?”

“That’s the last thing you need to worry about,” Khun Daeng pointed out. “We’ll find a replacement.”

“A replacement?” Maurice gasped.

“I’m not doing this to punish you, you do understand that right?” Khun Daeng pointed out. “I’m just trying to do what’s best for your image.”

“But,” Maurice started to protest.

“I understand,” Oil cut him off. “Thank you,” he said standing up, “and I’m sorry for causing you all the trouble.”

Khun Daeng nodded as the two bowed their heads before leaving her office.
* * *
In the Car:

“I hope this is the last time.” Maurice told him. “I’m serious Oil.” Oil didn’t answer. Instead he gazed out the window. Maurice continued. “Now what are we going to do in the meantime? How are we going to survive?”

“Can we stop to get a couple of drinks?” Oil said out of the blue.

Maurice nearly slammed on the brakes. “A drink?”

Oil turned his attention to his manager. “I’d really appreciate it.” He said.

Maurice looked at him and let out a breath. How could he say no to face like that. “Fine,” he answered. “I need a drink myself with all this crazy stuff going on.”

“Thanks,” Oil forced a smile.
* * *

At Clique Modeling Agency:

“Luktarn, you know the press will be asking you a ton of questions tonight,” May (May Fuerngarom), her agent, told her.

“Yeah, I know.” Luktarn replied.

“You remember what I told you to say right,” May asserted. Luktarn nodded. “Now, is Lift going to be there tonight?”

“No, he doesn’t want to face the press right now,” Luktarn answered.

“Good…too many folks, too many problems,” May said. “Have you spoken to Oil yet?”

“No, I haven’t spoken to P’Oil since the incident,” she sighed.

“Well, I think you should. Lay it on him that over means over.” May pointed out. “You know with this happening over and over again, it will not be good for your career. And you haven’t been in it long enough. You know new faces are popping up at every corner.”

“I know,” Luktarn answered almost in a whisper. But what she and Oil had was special. Its just that things didn’t go the way she had pictured.

May could see the sorrow in her face clearly. “You know he had all those time to care for you but he didn’t. You remember all those times he stood you up?” May hinted. “And the many nights you cried.”

Luktarn nodded her head. How could she forget? She knew being in a relationship with someone as popular as he is was going to be hard. But she wasn’t ready for all the pain that came along with it.

“Lift’s a good guy.” May continued. “Maybe not as good looking but he does take good care of you.” She rested her hands on Luktarn’s shoulders.

Luktarn smiled for the first time of their conversation. “He does, doesn’t he?” She agreed.

“I think you made the right choice to move on,” May added. “Now if only Oil would let things go and move on.”
* * *

“I knew it was a bad idea,” Maurice complained as he hauled Oil up to his bedroom. He nearly dropped him onto the bed. “A couple of drinks my butt,” he exhaled out of breath. He ran his hand over his forehead, wiping droplets of sweat away. “I don’t why you get a big house if you’re going to live by yourself. Why not stay in the condo? If not, at least get a maid or something. At least there’ll be help for incidents like this.”

He got up from the bed about to leave when he turned to look at Oil’s lifeless body. He stood there for awhile, feeling sorry for him. He slowly shook his head. He couldn’t just leave him there all alone. That’s probably the last thing he needs is to go thru this on his own.

“I guess I can hang around for awhile not because you’re the money in my pocket but because you’re my friend as well,” Maurice concluded with a deep, long breath.
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Posted 03 January 2008 - 12:41 PM

thanks for the update .... really interesting so far ....
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Posted 04 January 2008 - 11:37 AM

Good so far! It sounds like Oil and Luktarn have just made some break up news. Thanks for the story Teardrop.
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Posted 04 January 2008 - 02:44 PM

good start, i hope you continue...
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Posted 08 January 2008 - 05:39 AM

Love the beg... Aum is so cute and funny.
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Posted 08 January 2008 - 07:10 AM

Part 2:

A month later:

“You know you should really get someone to help around the house.” Maurice hinted as he rinsed out his glass.

“I’m not a dirty person. I keep my place clean,” Oil pointed out. “Beside, I have a maid come clean the house 2 times a week.”

“Still it’s better to have someone around than being alone in this big house,” Maurice responded.

“I like being alone,” Oil replied. “But don’t get me wrong. I like having you around.” Maurice gave him a look. “Thanks for being here for me. I really appreciate your company.” He concluded.

Maurice smiled, “Don’t thank me. It’s my way of surviving and monitoring you.” He said as he opened a bag of potato chips. “You know, killing two birds with one stone.”

Oil grinned at Maurice as he propped on the couch opposite of him. “I can see you’re doing a mighty fine job at it.”

“Of course,” he said in between bites. “Thanks to me, we’ll be out and about pretty soon.” Just then his cell phone rang. He quickly smacked the crumbs away from his hands and answered, “Hello. Yes, this is he. Ah-huh, yes…yes. Really! That would be great. Oh no, no problems at all.”

Oil lean forward trying to cue in on the conversation. He knew that money look on Maurice’s face.

“Oh no, thank you, have a nice day. Good-bye.” Maurice finally snapped his phone shut his eyes still aglow.

“What is it?” Oil eager to know now.

“We got our first gig!” he announced.

“What? Are you serious?” Oil asked excited. Maurice nodded. “That’s great!”

“I know,” Maurice nodded rubbing his palms together.

But that excitement quickly died down in Oil’s face. “But I can’t accept anything, remember? I’m still suspended.”

Maurice’s eyes still beaming. “But I think Khun Daeng will approve this one.”

Oil crocked up an eyebrow curious. “Really?”

Maurice nodded. “Come on. We’ll go see her right now. I’ll tell you all about it on the way.”
* * *

At Ch7:

“So what is this special gig that I hear about?” Khun Daeng asked the minute they walked into her office.

“Well,” Maurice didn’t waste a minute jumping in, “I got a call from a representative of Twin Corp. in San Francisco, CA. They want Oil to do a couple of shows and be a guest speaker for the fight against domestic violence, something to get the Thai people there involved.”

“San Francisco, California…” Khun Daeng said slowly, thinking things thru.

“It’s for a good cause and it’ll help with Oil’s image.” Maurice added.

“Did they mention for how long?” Khun Daeng questioned.

“About 3 weeks,” Maurice asserted. Khun Daend nodded. “Expense all taken care of.” He added.

“3 weeks huh,” Khun Daeng repeated as she looked over to Oil who sat patiently thru the whole conversation. Then she leaned back into her leather chair, “I see why not.”

Maurice was so pleased he nearly fell out of his chair. He glanced over to Oil who had a big smile spread across his face. “Oh thank you.” He said.

Khun Daeng smiled with a nod. “It’s a win, win situation. How can I let you pass on an opportunity like this?”

“Thank you for giving me a chance,” Oil said.

She nodded again, “And by the time you get back, things should be better here for you too.”

“I can’t thank you enough,” Maurice cheered. “I was getting tired of being his maid.”

“By the way, when do you leave?” she asked.

“Sometime next week, I’ll have to call to confirm with them again,” Maurice said.

“Thank you again,” Oil smiled. The two stood up, bowed, and turned to leave.

“Oh,” Khun Daeng caught them midway. “And don’t forget to relax and have a good time too.”

“We will.” The two flashed her big smiles before leaving her office.
* * *

“There’s my beautiful girl,” Lift said as he entered the dressing room, “and these are for you,” he handed her the bouquet of red roses.

“They’re beautiful,” Luktarn replied as she sniffed them. “Thank you.”

“I just came by to see you before you go on the cat walk,” he told her.

“You’re not staying?” she questioned.

“What gave you that idea? Of course I’m staying. You didn’t think I clear my work just to see you for a couple of second did you?” He smiled. “I couldn’t possibly leave without seeing you on that catwalk.” He leaned down and kissed her gently on the cheek.

“Luktarn, are you…” May stopped midway thru her sentence. “I’m sorry. I didn’t think anyone was here.” She looked at Lift a little embarrassed.

“I just came by to wish Luktarn good luck,” Lift said with a smile. “I’ll see you out there then.” He waved.

May shot Luktarn a teasing grin. “Ok, enough blushing, hurry up, the show is about to start in a couple of minutes.”

Luktarn nodded, cheeks still rosy pink, as she set the flowers aside and stood up. “I’ve been ready.” She said with confidence.

“That’s my girl,” May replied. “Now turn about so I can see the whole you.”

Luktarn spun around for her.

“Gorgeous,” May said.

“Thanks for everything P’May,” Luktarn said with a hug.

“Don’t mention it. You’re like a little sister I never had,” May returned the hug. “Now go out there and knock them dead.”

“Ok,” Luktarn flashed a bright smile. “See you after the show.” With that she slid out the door and made her way onto the walkway, with her head up high.
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Posted 08 January 2008 - 07:23 AM

Part 3:

A week later upon arriving in San Francisco:

“Ahh,” Maurice exhaled exhausted as he slumped down on the couch. “It’s a good thing that Twin Corp didn’t have a problem with us wanting to change hotel.”

“Yeah, I think I wouldn’t be able to breathe if we stayed near Thai Town,” Oil agreed.

Maurice nodded. “I didn’t think we were going to get swamped like that, especially our first step on US grounds.”

“You tell me. I didn’t know I was this popular here,” Oil said a little stunned, yet pleased.

“Uh huh,” Maurice was quick to agree to that. “Well I’m going to put away my things and take a nice long bath. You should do the same. We have a lunch meeting with Twin Corp around 1 PM.”

“What? You’re not going to put my things away for me?” Oil teased.

“Get a maid!” Maurice rolled his eyes at him and shut the door behind.

Oil let out a chuckle, grabbed his suitcase and rolled it into his room.
* * *

12:05 PM

“Shoot! Excuse me, coming through, sorry, coming through,” Aum ran thru the lobby. Just out of no where a little boy cut in front of her. “Holy Shit!” she shrieked and swayed to avoid knocking him down.

“Whoa!” she heard a male voice holler. Then instantly, *Thud*, she ran into a body, bounced off it, and landed hard into the floor.

“Watch out!” the guy grunted as she gathered her things, standing up. “What you problem?” he said in broken English.

“Oil, what happened?” A dark male with too much lip balm on asked him in Thai.

“This klutzy girl here just ran into me. She must be blind or something not to see me,” he replied to his friend.

Aum grinded her teeth at his comment. Sure she was at fault for running into him but she didn’t do it on purpose.

“You’re ok right,” the dark male asked. His friend nodded, giving Aum a nasty glare as he did. Then he turned to Aum. “You ok?” he said.

“I’m fine,” Aum replied back in Thai.

“You’re Thai?” the dark male questioned stunned.

“A 100%,” Aum answered. Then she looked at his friend. “I was going to apologize but now I change my mind. You’re lucky I don’t punch you in the face instead.” She shoved her way thru him. “Oh,” she turned around, “Next time if you’re going to talk shit about someone in a different language make sure they don’t understand that language because you’re only making a fool of yourself.” She started to walk away but then turned around again. “And you should teach your boyfriend some manners. You know people like him don’t survive long here in San Fran.” With that she flicked her curly hair and hurried thru the doors.

“Well,” Maurice turned to Oil with his hands on his hips. “What do you have to say about that?”

Oil gave him an annoyed look. “I don’t have time for stupid people,” he said and started to walk off.

“Hey where are you going?” Maurice called after him.

“Find me something to drink,” Oil said without turning around.

“Wait for me,” Maurice ran after him.
* * *

“Hey, what took you so long?” Jenny, Aum’s co-worker, asked the minute she walked into the room.

“Long story,” Aum replied as she pulled out her uniform and began changing.

“Thanks for covering for me though. I really appreciate it.” Jenny said.

“No problem, I can use a little extra hour anyway,” Aum told her.

“I’ll see you later then.” Jenny said.

“Ok, have a nice time with your son,” Aum waved as she shut her locker. Then she quickly pin her curls up and rush out to the counter.

“Hey you came in after all,” John, the other associate greeted her.

“Yeah,” Aum smiled. “And it’s been crazy already.” She started to say when her manager signaled her over. “I’ll be right back.” She said to John.

“This is Patcharapa Chaichue.” Peter, her manager introduced her when she got there. “Patcharapa, I like you to meet Miss Sara Buagnarm and Mr. Mick Chaiyah from Twin Corp. They’re looking for someone to look after their client staying here at our hotel.”

“Actually, he’s a Thai celebrity. He and his manager’s English are not as fluent,” Sara explained. “And with so much going on, we don’t have time to take care of them ourselves. And since he’s staying here we thought it would be best to find someone here instead.”

“I thought this would be a great opportunity for you.” Peter winked.

“But I don’t know how to be a take care of a celebrity. I’m just the front desk clerk,” Aum protested.

“We agreed to pay you extra for the job,” Mick offered.

“So what do you say?” Sara asked.

Aum thought about it for awhile. She did need the extra money. Living in San Francisco is so expensive let alone she needed to pay off her student loan. “I’ll give it a try but no guaranteed I’ll be a good guide,” she uttered.

“You’ll be great at it” Peter assured her.

“Thank you so much,” Sara said. “We really appreciate it.” Aum just smiled.

“We should get going then,” Mick looked at the time.

“Where are we going?” Aum asked confused.

“We have an appointment with them around noon,” Sara explained. Aum nodded her and followed them to the hotel restaurant.

“Great, you guys are here,” Mick said with a handshake to each. “Remember the guide/caretaker we told you about? Well, here she is. Miss Patcharapa Chaichue, I like to you me Mr. Oil Thana and Maurice, his manager. He’s a very popular Actor and Singer in Thailand.”

To Aum’s horror, it was couple she confronted earlier. Her mouth parted in shock, unable to say a word. *blah*

“You,” Oil said thru his teeth.

“Uh…,” Maurice had to pat him down. “Nice to meet you again,” Maurice said to Aum.

She swallowed the lump in her throat down slowly. “Pleasure is mine,” she replied trying hard to keep her voice steady. Oil rolled his eyes at her comment.

“Are we missing something here?” Sara questioned.

“Oh, it’s nothing,” Maurice smiled.

“Ok…” Mick said, “Why don’t we get something in our stomach while we go over the week's plan then.”

Aum reluctantly nodded and sat down with the group. She flashed a disgusted grin at Oil. ‘Whatever hot shot!’ she thought to herself. *muha*

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Posted 08 January 2008 - 10:58 AM

hahah lol thanks for the update.
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Posted 10 January 2008 - 12:19 AM

love it so far, please update soon..very amusing to read!!
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Posted 10 January 2008 - 08:45 AM

Omg.... Oil's broken english was hilarious!!!! *rll* Can't wait for the next update.
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Posted 10 January 2008 - 10:40 AM

thanks for the update ... its getting really good ... cant wait for to read more ..
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