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The last Days of Her Life Starring: Oil Thana and Christina V

#16 User is offline   michellewii 

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Posted 10 July 2010 - 10:11 PM

Chapter Eight

After Christina's art class, Christina received a text from Oil, for her to meet him at the beach again. He wanted to talk to her more just the two of them and enjoying the sunset view. "You seem to really like the sunset," she told him as she joined him infront of the beach. "Like you said, you don't see this everyday," he said.

"That's right," she told him. "I'm leaving in a few days so might as well make my time worthwhile," he said to her. "Yup," she agreed. They both continue to watch the sunset, the time was getting close to 8pm and they both were still conversating and laughing. Oil was having an awesome time and he still couldn't believe it.

At the same time, he thought he never meet anyone who would understand the things het talked about. Someone who can play along if he makes a job. Someone who can make him feel accepted. He really enjoy being around her.
The both of them continue talking til midnight. By midnight they went on their seperate ways.

The following day, he stopped by her volunteer class for kids, he even joined her and help out the kdis. He had such an amazing time that he wish that time would just freeze. The days he spent with her he felt like time was just flying by. At the end of the day, both went for dinner.

At the restaurant was just smiling endlessly. "You seem to be in a good mood today," he said as he took a bite of his steak. "Is this a date?" she whispered. "Well of course," he answered with a smile. She blushed. "Are you blushing?" he asked trying not to laugh. "Well, I have never been on a date before, I read it in books and seen it in movies and um relity," she said.

"Well, it is an honor," he told her. The whole time she had a smile on, she couldn;t expect for anything better. "Im leaving tomorrow already," Oil said sadly as they reach infron of her front porch. "Wow, that went by fast," she told him. "Yes, indeed it did, I wish I get another week," he told her sadly. "Well you have my number now, call or text anytime," she told him with her thumbs up.

"True but it would be different," he told her. "How," she asked.

"I like being around you," he said quietly. It made her blush again. "You can always visit," she replied. "That's right but it won't be often like the time now," he said. "Trust me oil, when you return to Bangkok, I'll be forgotten," she said as she took another step onto her front porch. "Please, don't leave yet," he said grabbing her hand softly.

"I want to see you again tomorrow before I leave," he told wanting to kiss her hand. "Well of course, I can do that for you," she told him squeezing his cheeks gently. "Really, you promise," he asked happily. "I promise," she told him. He kissed her hand and let it go softly. "I'm really looking forward tto it tomorrow," he told her.

She gave him a hug unexpectedly, he reutnrs the hug after a few seconds. "Thank you for these last couple of days, I had a really wonderful time," she said with her eyes close. "No, thank you," he told her. "I'm gonna miss you," she said as she pulled away from the hug.

"Don't miss me yet, I'm still here," he said.

They both gave each other one last hug and Oil left home. Not knwoing why he didn't want to leave. He wanted to be by her side tonight. He smack his head gently. "Oil, go home," he told himself. He wasn't sure. He just want to be with her and he was positive about that.

Chapter Nine

At the airport with Lift by his side, he waited for Christina. Anxious to see her and anxious to have everyone see her again. "Oil, we have to go," His boss exclaim. "Just a few more minutes," Oil begged. "Is she going to be here," Lift asked. "She has to, she promised me," Oil replied,

"Huh, promise huh and you said she doesn't mean a thing," lift said as he rolled his eyes. "That wasn't what I meant," Oil told him. "Doesn't matter but we have to leave now," lift said. "No, I'm not leaving yet," OIl argue.

"will you call her and see where she is at," Lift said nicely blinking his eyes. "yea thats a goo idea," Oil said. He dialed her number and it rang and rang. The first call, no one picked up. Second time he called again noone picked up. "Maybe she is ignoring you," Lift told him.

"Noway, she is not like that," Oil argue back.

"Oil, time," his boss said pointing at his watch on his risk. "Boss just a moment," Oil said. He was panicking. Oil didn't understand why she wan't picking up her phone. Suddenly, his phone rang and it was Christina. A big smile appear on his fae and he quickly picks up.

"Christina, I'm so glad you call, where are you," he asked over the phone.
There were a silence coming from her phone, then in a few seconds a voice came upon. It wasn't Chrisitna.

"Oil," the voice asked. "Yes," Oil answered.

"I'm ken, Christina's friend," ken introduced himself. "Oh yea Christina has talked to me non stop about you," Oil said smiling. "Likewise," Ken said sadly. "really," Oil asked surprisingly.

"I call to let you know that Christina won't be coming to see you at the airport not today," Ken said. "What, not today, she promised me," Oil said madly. "Not today, not ever," ken said sounding angry.

"What is that suppose to mean, are you keeping her away from me," Oil yelled through the phone. "Quiet down," Lift hiised.

"Let me talk to her," Oil yelled.

"Come meet me at the hospital, the Sutter Cancer Center, I'll be more than happy to explain it to you," Ken said through the phone. "Hospital, why there, where is Christina," Oil asked.

"Christina is here with me," Ken said and hung up the phone.

Oil ran back to his boss. "Boss, I can't leave I have to go see her," Oil said notifying his boos. Not being able to finish explaining, he took off running. Lift and Aom followed him.

In the cab, Oil felt tears in his eyes, not knowing whats going on but all he can think of was that Christina had broken the promise that she made to him. "How could you," he thought and a tear stroll down from his eyes.

At the hospital

Oil got of the cab, and Ken who waited outside immediately spotted him with his disguise. "you must be Oil," Ken said walking up to him. "Ken?" Oil asked.

"Yes," Ken answered. Ken stared at him with anger but did nothing.

'Where is she, why did you have me meet you here," Oil asked angrily.

"You think I want to be here, you think I want to meet you here," ken asked rolling up his fist. "Christina is here," Ken pointed to the doors.

"Why didn't she tell me that she was working today," Oil thought and ran inside. Ken shook his head. "just be quiet and follow me please," ken asked nicely.

Oil nodded and followed him inside.

They both took an elevator to reach her destination, she was on the fourth floor.

As Oil walks behind Ken, there were silence between them. Ken suddenly stop and opens the door to his right, walks in and followed by Oil. When Ken was out of Oil's sight, something caught his eyes in the far center of the room. A pale girl laying down helplessly, lifeless.

"Why are we here," Oil asked. "Oil, take another closer look," Ken told him and by this time, ken broke into tears.

Oil walk closer to the stiff figure across the room. When he got closer, he recognize the face. "Chris-ti--a," Oil stuttered and going to break into tears at the same time. "I don't get it," Oil said and collapse to his knees.

"I know that you and Christina had gotten pretty close for the last couple of days, but I'm sure that she had never told you about her illness," Ken said sadly. Oil got up and looks at ken. "Illness, she doesn't have any illness, she is a healthy young lady," Oil replied. "She may look healthy on the outside but in the inside she is not,:" ken replied back.

"What do you mean," Oil asked.

"Can you not figure, were in the cancer hosiptal," Ken said raising his hands up in the air.

"She has cancer," Oil asked.

Ken nodded. "For how long," Oil asked. "She has had it eversine she donated her kidney to save a little girl's life, her cancer never got effected till both of parents death," Ken explained. A few months after her parents death, she began to develop rashes and loose hair. I was getting very worried, and one day she fainted and I took her in.

After the test, the result came out that she was cncer positive. If she known this before, she would sitll have a chance of getting rid of it but no, it was too late.

Everyday, she try to live her life as much as she can being surrounded by the community. After the cancer went away without any treatment, she started saving money and hoping to meet you one day, it was her dream and goal. She knew that cancer will come back to her eventually, and she wanted to fulfill all her dreams, ken said,

Now both were shedding tears.

"Flashback"
"I always be loosing people and people always run away from me," Christina said.

"End of flashback*

Oil shut his eyes hard.

Ken continue to talk more about Christina life before Oil met Christina again.

"Christina fainted last night after talking for 3 hours about you," ken said. I took her in and they told me that she is in a coma. We have to keep talking to her and try to see if she will wake up," ken said. Oil walk towards her and sat on the chair beside her. Grabs her hand and kiss it.

"Hey Christina, I'm here," Oil said. "Why did you hide this from me, do you know how much it hurts to know that you're in this condition," he said crying.

"You almost me think that you were the bad one and broke the promise," he said.

"Please wake up and let's go to watch the sunset again," he begged. "Please," he said.

"I had the most amazing days with you," he said kissing her hand again.

"I love you," he told her and buried his dance in her small hand.

*BEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE
EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEP***

"Christina, No, NOOOOOOOOOO!" Oil called out loud. Ken ran to the other side. "Hey Chris, you can't do this to me, I love you," Ken cried. All the nurse and doctors came running and some of the nurse pushed Ken and Oil both out of the room.

"Oil," Lift called out to him as him and Aom ran towards him.

"This can't be happening," Oil ylled and punch the wall. Now there leaves a mark.

"I'm glad that wasn't me," Lift said.

"Forget it Oil," Ken said. "What, what are you saying?!" Oil said angrily. "She's happy," Ken said. "Happy, are you kidding me," Oil yelled. "She already knew this day would come but the doctors told us it will another year from now," Ken said. "Christina lied to me, it was alot sooner than what she had told me," ken started.

"Oil, she waited all night for you," ken said sadly.

"She was still struggling to get back but you satisfied her with just saying those three words," ken said as he pointed at her room.

"What's going on Oil," Lift asked confused.

"She's happy, you even spent your last couple of your days here with her," ken said. "She wouldn't ask for more," Ken said crying.

Chapter 10

Funeral Home

A year later

OIL's POV

It has already been a year and the last days of her life are the days I will remember forever. She had changed my life forever and she had taught me so many things that I never thought I'd hear and see. Even though, she did replace Aum but I will love them both forever. Christina, I love you and I will never forget you.

Those days we both spent together, were amazing and I can't even explain it. You open up my eyes to a wider view.

here is my story to tell, even though it was a only few days I spent with her and gotten to know her. There were so much more to it.

The last days of life she showed me what life really is! She showed me the differences in people. She showed me who I was and am.

The End

Even though, it had only taken me
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Posted 11 July 2010 - 12:32 PM

OMG it end that much!! i thought that they would get married!! LOL! :)
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Posted 11 July 2010 - 04:17 PM

I'm sorry..the ending wasn't a happy ending nor the ending you expected
But I did debate a lot. Lol..
Please stay tune for my. Upcoming fanfic. Its a longer fanfuc
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Posted 12 July 2010 - 08:08 PM

Is this ur storyy??sure ill love to read...Looks interesting!
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Posted 12 July 2010 - 08:10 PM

goodness the name of the na'ek in here reminds me of a girl I work with, ChristinaV lol
They say: You don't know what you've got until it's gone

Truth: You knew exactly what you had, you just thought you'd never lose it
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Posted 12 July 2010 - 11:59 PM

View Postooo, on Jul 12 2010, 08:08 PM, said:

Is this ur storyy??sure ill love to read...Looks interesting!


Yes, its my short story...
I'm currently working on a new story right now, its call "Confidential & complicated"
its not completed yet, therefore you can find it in the fanfic section...be sure to read that as well..thanks
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Posted 13 July 2010 - 12:00 AM

View PostMai, on Jul 12 2010, 08:10 PM, said:

goodness the name of the na'ek in here reminds me of a girl I work with, ChristinaV lol


really???
V is actually not really her real last name. But alot of magazines and photographers usually put her under ass ChrissV. But since, I am writing this story about her I want to use Christina so it sounds more like a girl's name
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